Thursday, February 25, 2010

the night I keep on remembering


blinding midnight beam
broken, tainted window pane
flowing frozen sore
peeking of rose vines below
hiding shaft of brilliance
over dense dew of shadows
dripping fluid of each others body
tang of bitter-sweet melancholy
touch of juicy lips
digs deeper grave of abyss
decades of harsh strokes
heals no numbing wounds nor sores
yet, taps our broken souls
treasures of collected sins
and remained hidden pleasures
then, expect an arrangement that is not meant
for another tomorrow

11 comments:

ash said...

ikaw na! haha..

dabo said...

kaw na poet!

engel said...

talented! =)

pie said...

at may dripping fluid ka pang nalalaman! hehehe.

wanderingcommuter said...

hahaha! ako na lahat!!! ako na din pumatay kay lapu-lapu! ako na! amin na ang trophy ko! lol

Yj said...

CHAKA!!!!

hahahaha naiinggit bigla...

lagi nalang IKAW! IKAW na lang lagi....

si Dabo naman!!! lalo na at siya ang unang una sa pila para mapanood si John Lloyd at Bea hahahahaha

kiel estrella said...

hindi lang ikaw. ako rin.

(tunay na inggitera)

haha

Lance said...

sobrang dramang cheesy cheesy..hehehe!
nice!

Victor Gregor said...

Parang ang tema ng tula ay "body fluids." LOL.

ewongx said...

so... :-)

duking said...

malupit ang paksa ng iyong tula,hehehe!

salamat po sa pagbisita sa blog ko.pagnagamay ko yung ibang fuatures,isasama ko po kayo sa blogroll.

sa ngayon,rock n' roll muna!