Wednesday, April 27, 2005

patetik

ibigay sa kawalan
ikubli sa pangako
at ipako sa lawak ng dalampasigan
sa mga abstraktong salita
sa bukas na hindi naman darating
at sa tagpuang patuloy ka pa rin hihintayin

1 comment:

Lance said...

Hi wanderer,
I was not able to read through your recent posts lately because I was sick and got admitted to a hospital for 3 days. But I'm fine now. I just would like to let you know that I am posting something out from your posted "patetik" poem. I find it very nice and moving - then out of the blue, I tried to translate it to english and guess how it reads!!!... hehehehe
I am translating it by how I understood the poem. I was trying to make it closely related to the poem itself when it comes to word by word translation but there are some words that I added to make it sound nice (or at least I thought it should.)
Pls don't hesitate to tell me if you want it removed.
Thanks!

Lance